Are my lyrics any good? Mellow with a build vibe I thought. Just started writing couple weeks ago.?

Let's runaway
To someplace far
We'll spend some time
I'll learn to play guitar
For you

Let's spend our days
In paradise
We'll drink some wine
I'd love to sail the Nile
With you

Please, open up your heart
Let me in
You're a work of art
Like there's never been
It's true

I've gotta live my life with you
It's what I gotta do
I've gotta live my life with you
Ya, it's what I gotta do
Live my life with you
What I gotta do

I'm so amazed
With who you are
I bless the days
I'm shined by your star
It's true

And I'm countin' all the days
Till' you open up your heart
Just countin' all the days
Till' we can have a start
And I'm countin' all the days
Till' you open up your heart
Just countin' all the days
Till' we can have a start
I wanna be with you
I wanna be with you
I wanna be with you
Ya, It's true
I wanna be with you